I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi my name is Lauren from St. Bernadette's School. I like the picture you made of the head lice. My favorite part was the Adamon. Maybe next time you could make it more detailed like adding eyes. Any way nice job it was very eye catching.
Hey Levi I really liked reading and looking and your diagram maybe next time you could write more on your blurb like why you had to it. My favorite part of the diagram is the head lice your really good at making things
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Hi Levi my name is Saxon from yaldhurst model school and I really liked your diagram of head lice and my brothers name is Levi.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Lauren from St. Bernadette's School. I like the picture you made of the head lice. My favorite part was the Adamon. Maybe next time you could make it more detailed like adding eyes. Any way nice job it was very eye catching.
ReplyDeleteHey Levi I really liked reading and looking and your diagram maybe next time you could write more on your blurb like why you had to it. My favorite part of the diagram is the head lice your really good at making things
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