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Tuesday, 3 March 2020

Wonder Story

Julian & Jack Fight Scene. Tuesday 3 Of March


Parts - 1 Hour And 6 Minutes To 1 Hour 7 Minutes 40 Seconds.


Camera Angles / Shots.
- Over the shoulder as Jack punches Julian , makes us feel part of the
event that is happening.
- Low angle during the fight makes the person on top look stronger.

- Dutch tilt - lockers on an angle , used to show something isn't in the world.

Special Effects.
Slow Motion - makes easier to see especially emotions ,
also makes it feel more intense.

Music / Sound.
Tempo slow , minor = sad , dynamics -quiet = intense.
Music comes in with a voice over that makes it more effective and reflective.
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Fight At The Nature Reserve.

Parts - 1 Hour 29 Minutes 40 Seconds To 1 Hour 32 Minutes 25 Seconds.

Camera Angle / Shots.
High angle shot down onto the bully, makes him look weak and
vulnerable while Auggie , Jack , Amas , and the other look strong.

Minor = Sad

Music / Sound.
Used to build tension , suspense.
Tempo - very quick rhythm.
Dynamics - starts quiet but gets louder as the boys run away -
builds anxiety.
Chords - minor - looked at with tempo makes it feel anxious.

Themes.
Importance of friendship and family.
Kindness.
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Conclusion / Ending.

Camera Angles / Shots.
Tilt shot up as Auggie bows , we are shown a similar scene to the opening ,
only this time the background is actual space rather than a painting on Auggie's bedroom wall.
Finishes with a repeat of the astronaut jumping arms up into the shot.

Music.
Major Key - Happy.
Tempo - Fast, gives energy. Makes us feel Happy.
Dynamics - Loud - gives energy.

Where as the start Auggie was imagining himself as happy , at the end he actually is
happy which is why the background of the scene is now realistic. 






Tuesday, 15 October 2019

Things About Lions

Facts About Lions!- 
They Live For 10-15 Years Total.
They Spend 16 - 20 Hours Resting In The Sun.
African Lions Are The Most Social Out Of Big Sized Cats.
The Average Lion Way Approximately 180 Kg's
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My Favourite Things About Lions! - 
Their Fast.
Their Fierce.
Their Protective Over Their Family.  
Their "ROAR" Is Crazy Sounding.
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What Is Their Environment? - 
They live in open areas covers in shrubs and other trees, bushes and other types of things that cover up the nature in the jungle or desert typed places.
They live in places that have a lot of wood just sitting around in the middle of nowhere.
Lions have to kill any type of animal that has seem to wander around the lands that they have been staying for a very long time, so any other type of animal that has trespassed has to get killed or if they down get kills stared at or chased down and if they get away because the Lion stopped chasing they are lucky because it could have been over for that animal that wandered into there land!
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Friday, 11 August 2017

Bliss Balls Experiment

                  


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    Steps: Washed hands … For no germs
  • Equipment: - Food Processor, Measuring
  • Ingredients: - Raisins,Coconut Oil,Cocoa
 
On Wednesday our literacy class made these delicious things called bliss balls the actual name for them were Coconut Raisin Bliss Balls we made them with coconut oil raisins/sultanas we were aloud to cover them with pieces of coconut or cocoa but I roll It In both of them It didn’t really look like chocolate but It turned out I was sort of chocolate but I ate It anyway because It looked good but It looked gross at the same time but I said to myself I can’t say It’s gross when I haven’t even tried It yet so the ball wait let me think … Ooh bliss ball carry-on so I put the bliss ball Into my mouth and started to chew and yea know what It wasn’t even that bad so It chewed a little bit more and chewed even faster and asked If there’s anymore left over but there wasn’t so I walked of and started to work and wrote a plan about this writing right here right now.   Now Questions

Was It Yum : Yes

Wednesday, 28 June 2017

My Story About Experiencing A Tornado

WALT: We are learning to write a Information Report with the correct structure and language features

We are learning about weather features.
This Is my writing about experiencing a tornado enjoy this story by the way this Isn't real!!

Weather Writing

“WOW!! Well It’s a very windy day today I wonder what’s happening”
2 HOURS LATER  Look at that there’s a pretty big tornado out there I have to get out of here before the tornado hits our house.
So I start running as fast as I can down the opposite way that the tornado was coming.
So I tried to run faster but I was already running as fast as I could & then I turned and looked and remembered that I lived across the street for my old friend and warned him you guys got to get out a tornado’s coming…

TOO LATE      10 MINUTES LATER

I started to wake up and everything from the roof was just hanging there then the tornado came back again OH NO!


Gooey Disgusting Snot

One day the Senior Syndicate put their hand's In Snot It was a bit gross but fun at the same time.

27/3/17       Disgusting  Gooey Snot Writing


As soon as Mr Breach put that gooey weird looking thing on the table but It turned out to be snot. I was thinking to myself I want to put my hands In there but It was snot so I didn’t know what to do about It. But I put my hands In there eventually.We had to smell,feel,hear and see first It was weird.


I started to look at that disgusting gooey stuff It was very green but It looked fun but I wanted to just shove my hands In there so did Tai,Tamani and the other people In my group.


When I had to smell It, It sort of smelt like perfume and shampoo It was weird I never thought that It would smell like that. It was a nice smell and It also kinda smelt like PVA glue.


Mr Breach told us to listen to what It sounds like, at first I couldn’t hear anything but then Tai and Tamani put their ear up to It and they heard something so I put my ear up to It and It sounded like the beach with the waves washing up to the shore.


And then finally It got to happen taste It, It tasted so disgusting well I don’t know what It taste like because It was snot so i didn’t really want to know what It tasted like.


So we begin to touch It with our bare hands I was also thinking could It be dangerous to touch It so I touched a little bit of It and decided it wasn’t too bad It was just cold so I kept playing with It and realized that It was really fun.


Snot Writing

By Levi

Tuesday, 6 June 2017

Information Report/Antarctica


This is my Antarctica information report hope you like it 


Title / Name
Levi K Antarctica
Introduction
Cold, Bottom , Awesome
Characteristic
Animals, Icy , Freezing, Fantastic
Evaluation
At one time in my life I would like to go to Antarctica
Draft Writing
Holey Moley look at that there are penguins right in front of me. I can not believe my eyes right now! The penguins must feel really warm right now because of their feathers. The animals are cool i like albatrosses but i like all the other animals i am wondering how they don’t get cold like the bird, albatross. The ground would be slippery because it is so icy but they must have heaps of grip on their boots.

Antarctica is really cold because it’s at the bottom of the world and because it’s always snowing.

If i had a chance i would go there with my friends or family. Antarctica is awesome because you can explore heaps and play with the animals well some of them anyway.


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Friday, 5 May 2017

My Mysterious Story

This is my mysterious story I made for a narritive hope you enjoy my writing


The Mysterious Story


One cloudy day I went to my friends house to play with him and I yelled, “Nikora come here I found something unfamiliar. It looks weird!”
Nikora  talked back and said “Yeah hold on I’ll get dressed…”


5 minutes later…
“Hey! Levi, what Is that thing that was um … unfamiliar? Let me have a quick look at It and I’ll try to figure out what it is.” Nikora stopped and stared at It for a while, “wait this is mine um… I totally dropped it when I raced my brother it is so mine I brought it with my own money”.
I started thinking, because It sounded like he was lying but I would soon find out because he was acting like It was a big deal because It was totally his apparently.


One day he brang the totally his thing to school and showed our friends Tamani,Logan.N,Tai and Tyson and Nikora said this IS totally mine I brought with my own money. After they stopped talking Tamani,Logan,Tai and Tyson sat next to me at lunch and said, “I’ve never seen that thing In his room before that’s really weird.”  
Levi said “because yesterday he found it on the ground and said he dropped when he raced his brother, but I’m not sure It’s actually his.”
The next day was saturday and me Tamani,Logan,Tai and Tyson went to Nikoras house and tried to get the truth out of him and eventually he said… “Fine, okay, okay it’s not mine look at this it’s really cool and I could get money from it. But I’ll give it to a shop or something. Anyway sorry for lying to you guys.”

Created By Levi

Friday, 17 March 2017

Spencer Park 2017

On Friday the Year 4-6 Learning Community went to Spencer Park. As soon a we got to Spencer Park we had a little chat with Mr Breach.
Then Mr Breach sent us to get our morning tea.
After we ate morning tea we went to the awesome playground at morning tea I played tag with Nikora Tai,Tamani,Tyson and Nathan.


Then when Mr Breach told the Learning Community to get our bags and then follow him and we went through some forest and we stopped and people went toilet,got a drink or to fill up their bottle up so on the way they can drink out of their bottle and then turned Into the beach.


At the beach we had to make a big stick or branches stand up and who’s Is the biggest tower In my group was Erika,Taila,Jovarn and
Levi C we got heaps of help from Dad he kept on holding the big sticks up when we dig sand to hold It up so It stands.


And then we Mr Breach tells us to stop what we're doing the teachers have to judge who’s Is the highest and some other stuff our group didn’t win but we tried our best because we persisted but the other group must have persisted more than us. But then we had beach races I didn't win because I jumped Into Chelsea´s mum than Tamani beat me bye heaps

After we finished at the beach we walked back through the forest thingy and we went back to Spencer Parks real park and the teachers sent to get our lunch eat and then when we’re finished we can play tennis,Volleyball,Kicks with a Rugby Ball and much more. That was our Spencer Park trip.

I had a really good time at spencer park I got to know more about people and i would really want go again
By Levi

Friday, 25 November 2016

My Persuasive Writing #2

My Persuasive Writing #2



What am I arguing to write and why?


What Superpower would I have and why. I would choose Super Speed because It would help me to help other people.


Save people in dangerous situations.

So If someone was getting bullied you can quickly go to them and catch them being naughty or arrogant. So if they say It's all about me or punch someone In the face that’s called bullying and with my Super Speed I can save them before It gets out of hand.


Delivering life saving goods.

So Is someone got bitten by a cobra/snake there Is poison In you and If you have Super Speed you can quickly give him a special type of drink to keep that person alive.



Can catch robbers who steal money.

So If you see someone running away with money with a mask on you can just catch them quickly get the money and take It back to the boss or the worker.


Super speed would be awesome to have because you can save the whole entire world or your own country.