On Friday the Year 4-6 Learning Community went to Spencer Park. As soon a we got to Spencer Park we had a little chat with Mr Breach.
Then Mr Breach sent us to get our morning tea.
Then when Mr Breach told the Learning Community to get our bags and then follow him and we went through some forest and we stopped and people went toilet,got a drink or to fill up their bottle up so on the way they can drink out of their bottle and then turned Into the beach.
At the beach we had to make a big stick or branches stand up and who’s Is the biggest tower In my group was Erika,Taila,Jovarn and
Levi C we got heaps of help from Dad he kept on holding the big sticks up when we dig sand to hold It up so It stands.
After we finished at the beach we walked back through the forest thingy and we went back to Spencer Parks real park and the teachers sent to get our lunch eat and then when we’re finished we can play tennis,Volleyball,Kicks with a Rugby Ball and much more. That was our Spencer Park trip.
I had a really good time at spencer park I got to know more about people and i would really want go again
By Levi
By Levi
Hi Levi
ReplyDeleteGreat work I love how you have write about the trip very good. Maybe next time you could cheek your writing because paragraph 3 and 4 it do not make sense. These are the bits that do not make sense sticks up when we dig sand you write dig instead of dag and that last one is And then we Mr Breach tells you also put we instead of when.