In Hururmanu/Music Today we were writing and poem about music so we had to start off with a small sentences do make it into a better sentence that makes it more interesting and some how combines with Music. We had to choose 1 out of 3 they were, The Music Was Loud, She Played The Guitar and He Was Singing I chose The Music Was Loud
This is what I did!
!The Music Was Loud!
The Disturbing Music Was Ear Piercing!
Last Night The Disturbing Music Was Ear Piercing!
Next Door, Last Night The Disturbing Music Was Ear Piercing!
Next Door, Last Night The Disturbing Music Was Ear Piercing Because Every Minute They Turned It Up Louder!
Next Door, Last Night The Disturbing Music Was Ear Piercing Because Every Minute They Turned It Up Louder Because The Next Door Neighbor Didn't Care About Their Neighbors!
Hi Levi
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your simple to complex sentences with us! To improve your writing, please make sure only the first word or any words after a full stop have a capital letter. These aren't proper sentences because you have too many capitals!
- Miss Birtch