I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Levi I´m Michael. I like your blog post about your Be Funky/Thing link. You are very creative and I like how you've used SISOMO when taking you´re picture. I also really like your glasses. Next time it could be more detailed.
Hi Levi, I am Erika I really like how you have been creative with your work and how yo have decorated it. It looks so decorated and i really love the background but maybe next time you could have more detail and Maybe you could make a bigger drink??
Hi Levi, It's me Natalia I really like this blog post about Be funky and thing link, and I also like how you have put lots of cool accessories on. But for next time that you write a blog post you could maybe put some more detail into the blog post.
Hi Levi, It's me Natalia I really like this blog post about Be funky and thing link, and I also like how you have put lots of cool accessories on. But for next time that you write a blog post you could maybe put some more detail into the blog post.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Hi Levi I´m Michael. I like your blog post about your Be Funky/Thing link. You are very creative and I like how you've used SISOMO when taking you´re picture. I also really like your glasses. Next time it could be more detailed.
ReplyDeleteHi Levi, I am Erika I really like how you have been creative with your work and how yo have decorated it. It looks so decorated and i really love the background but maybe next time you could have more detail and Maybe you could make a bigger drink??
ReplyDeleteYou could also put more detail of what you did that day so more writing with describing words and WoW words cause that would be awesome?
ReplyDeleteHi Levi, It's me Natalia
ReplyDeleteI really like this blog post about Be funky and thing link, and I also like how you have put lots of cool accessories on. But for next time that you write a blog post you could maybe put some more detail into the blog post.
Thanks, from Natalia
Hi Levi, It's me Natalia
ReplyDeleteI really like this blog post about Be funky and thing link, and I also like how you have put lots of cool accessories on. But for next time that you write a blog post you could maybe put some more detail into the blog post.
Thanks, from Natalia