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Monday 8 November 2021

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Text Title ~ Father clutches son's photo in court as three people appear in connection to the alleged murder.

Text Type ~ Article.

Text Creator ~ Sam Sherwood 

Critical Literacy Question... What is the text about? How do we know? ~
The text is about a tragic death that has seem to be caused by Murder, a 16-year-old male had been invited and attended a 15-year-olds birthday party, and sadly Connor Whitehead (Victim) had been unfortunately shot and killed the night of the party.

Date ~  8 of November 2021
Date of Scene ~ 5 of November 2021

So far there have been 4 arrests for this murder but there's one more suspect on the run yet to be caught and seen. There was a disagreement that caused some drama and Connor walked outside to calm down and get some fresh air. Then the worst possible thing that could've happened, happened. Connor had contacted his Father when he was at work asking him if he could stay the night at his mate's house. His father replied, "Yes have fun, and be safe".
 
When His dad made his way back home from work around about 5.30pm Connor was getting ready with a couple of friends. Connor asked if he and his friends could stay at his house following the party, which was fine with him.


At bout 7pm the group went to leave.

"I said, 'Have a good time mate, I love you. '
"He said, 'I love you too. He headed out the door and that was the last time I saw him."


3 comments:

  1. what a wonderful blog post, very intresting great to see you included all informaion

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  2. Hi Levi
    I like the way you made your post concise and kept it easy to read. I connected with this post because the victim of the shooting is my age too. I don't have anything for you to add.

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  3. Kia Ora Levi, I like your blogpost, there is some good information about the tragic accident that happened on Friday Night, Very sad to hear about this. Maybe try and add some other stuff with some witnesses and all that, but other than that you have done a good job with your Article.
    Kaleb.

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