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Thursday 7 April 2016

Made up story

{Characters} The richest man ever
{Situations} A hurricane
{Objects} A pyramid
{Places} Behind a waterfall




Once there was the richest man In the world Brought a hurricane and went behind a waterfall and tried to build a pyramid It didn’t work at first but he kept on trying until he got it right and finally he did it and then he was so happy he went inside and brought some more stuff to put in the pyramid and he was so impressed he didn’t want to stop putting stuff in the pyramid so he brought some upgrades on the hurricane he put some more things In It to make it faster so he stopped spending his money that fast so he can get more money to put some more upgrades on the hurricane and to buy more stuff for the Interesting pyramid he built…. 2 hours later  

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  1. well done wewi I like the way you did ...

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