This is my mysterious story I made for a narritive hope you enjoy my writing
The Mysterious Story
One cloudy day I went to my friends house to play with him and I yelled, “Nikora come here I found something unfamiliar. It looks weird!”
Nikora talked back and said “Yeah hold on I’ll get dressed…”
5 minutes later…
“Hey! Levi, what Is that thing that was um … unfamiliar? Let me have a quick look at It and I’ll try to figure out what it is.” Nikora stopped and stared at It for a while, “wait this is mine um… I totally dropped it when I raced my brother it is so mine I brought it with my own money”.
I started thinking, because It sounded like he was lying but I would soon find out because he was acting like It was a big deal because It was totally his apparently.
One day he brang the totally his thing to school and showed our friends Tamani,Logan.N,Tai and Tyson and Nikora said this IS totally mine I brought with my own money. After they stopped talking Tamani,Logan,Tai and Tyson sat next to me at lunch and said, “I’ve never seen that thing In his room before that’s really weird.”
Levi said “because yesterday he found it on the ground and said he dropped when he raced his brother, but I’m not sure It’s actually his.”
The next day was saturday and me Tamani,Logan,Tai and Tyson went to Nikoras house and tried to get the truth out of him and eventually he said… “Fine, okay, okay it’s not mine look at this it’s really cool and I could get money from it. But I’ll give it to a shop or something. Anyway sorry for lying to you guys.”
Created By Levi
Great story writing Levi. I like how you used direct speech I could imagine the characters speaking in my head.
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