My Persuasive writing

P Scooters dominate playgrounds.

E Schools don’t have a lot of space, scooters tend to take over the playground.

E You won’t be able to play sports because their scooters, scootering in your space.

Scooters dominate the school playground. They should get more space to ride their scooters so they don’t small children over

P Scootering Is dangerous

E Often the riders don’t wear safety gear so if they fall off they get hurt.

E Some of the tricks are very unsafe and often lead to bad injures. Sometime the injuries require a trip to the hospital when riders don’t wear safety gear.

Schools don't  have a lot of space if you let the people with scooters scooter arounds schools when there little children

P Scooters are expensive.
E scooters are expensive to buy and so Is the safety gear.
E Scooters can get easily damaged and the scooter can be expensive to fix.

Ending

I feel like principles shouldn't let people ride scooters in school. Because when you ride your scooters In school you might knock over small intestine children. Maybe you could hurt yourself at one stage.