Show Not Tell!
So in this week we are learning about *SHOW NOT TELL* so we have to describe and put more detail into the sentence that is basic...
The Buildings Are Tall...
The buildings are disguising up in the clouds with all the other buildings sitting up high.
Sarah Was Really Upset...
She was face down lying on her bed with emotion flowing through her mind while thinking about what has happened in the past with her friends and family
She Was So Happy To See Him...
She ran to him with excitement, joy & thrill whilst Adrenalin rushing through her body, like when you see a family member for the first time in a while.
The Lake Was Beautiful...
The reflection of the water made it feel like I was in a dream, falling slowly into the water.
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